Well done with you writing. Its great to see you really enjoying what you are writing. I think if you keep this during literacy time your improvement will be amazing. I enjoyed reading your story. You seem to like writing scary things? Maybe one day you might write your own novel? Keep up the good work! :)
Kia Ora, Mrs Costello. Thank you for the great feedback. I have recently thought about doing a small novel. I do prefer writing about scary stuff as I like it better then writing it about something else.
Thank you for commenting and for the great feed back!
Hi Reuben
ReplyDeleteWell done with you writing. Its great to see you really enjoying what you are writing. I think if you keep this during literacy time your improvement will be amazing.
I enjoyed reading your story. You seem to like writing scary things? Maybe one day you might write your own novel?
Keep up the good work! :)
Kia Ora, Mrs Costello.
DeleteThank you for the great feedback. I have recently thought about doing a small novel. I do prefer writing about scary stuff as I like it better then writing it about something else.
Thank you for commenting and for the great feed back!